terça-feira, 20 de abril de 2010

TRAGEDY IN RIO

Hey there,
Is everething ok? Did you know that here in Rio de Janeiro we had an huge rain that destroyed a lot of places? The city that I live, Niterói was the most destroyed and a lot of people lost their homes and personal stuff. I am very concerned abou that.

So I will tell you about a project that we have here to help the poors.
We colect the donations and distributes to them.

You don`t need to travel all away here, you can help in many ways, by sending by mail clothes, hygiene material, toys, food etc...

They are needing a lot of help from persons with a kind heart.

I wish that you can help in our cause and also make the world better.

Thanks

Vitor Nobre

Um comentário:

  1. It was very wise to refer to this tragedy that is so close to us, Vitor!
    Take a look at these minor mistakes.

    everething = everything
    an huge rain = a huge rain
    The city that = ... where
    abou that = about that
    We colect the donations = We are collecting donations
    distributes to them = distributing to those in need
    all away = all the way
    persons = people

    See you, Janine

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