One day my parents and I were going to Espírito Santo. My unlucky day began when I awoke with a headache. Going to Espírito Santo we took a huge traffic jam that lasted three hours.
After all that, we got hungry and there was no food because it would be a trip not too long. Arriving in the Espírito Santo, we got a lot of time looking for the hotel we were going to stay, then we went to find my room and rest because it was a trip tiring.
It's all...bye
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Traffic jams are a terrible problem when we have to face them! But I am sure you've had a great time after that, right, Bruno!
ResponderExcluirThere are some minor mistakes, you should observe:
I awoke = I woke up
we took a huge = we got stuck in a...
it would be a trip not too long = it wouldn't be such a long trip
the Espírito Santo = E. Santo
we got a lot of time = it look us a long time
we went to find my room = we went to our romms
and rest = and rested
a trip tiring = a tiring trip
Janine
It's all...bye