Hi Janine
I will tell you a story that I think its a little bit funny.
When I was 7 years old I went to my aunt house because she was doing a big party but I went there thinking that its was my cousing party but the party it was for me, when I arrive I don´t understand nothing, my friends and my family it was here and they started to sing ¨happy birthday to you¨ and I looked for everybody and my mother`s came and said happy birthday my son , and everybody`s came near to me and said you will be have a big surprise in the end of the party in the time I thougth is somethig that I will win, but in the end of the party my sister, my cousins and my friends came with a big bucket and inside the bucket has a lot of eggs I started to run but I coudn`t. I went home all dirty of eggs and crazy to take a shower.
Edgard
Hi Edgar!
ResponderExcluirThere are some minor problems in your composition. I hope you can check them!
I think its a little bit funny = ... is a...
my aunt house = my aunt's house
doing = throwing
I went there = ... got there,
its was my cousing party = it was my cousin's party
but the party it was for me = the party was...
when I arrive I don´t understand nothing = When I arrived I didn´t understand anything
it was here = were there
I looked for everybody = I looked at...
my mother`s came = my mother came
happy birthday my son = Happy birthday, my son.
and everybody`s came near to me = And everybody came near me
you will be have a big surprise = you will have...
in the end of the party = at the...
in the time = At that time
is somethig = was something
will win = would...
inside the bucket has a lot of eggs = ... there were a lot of eggs.
See you around,
Janine