The Travel
One day my fathers diceded to travel to Bahia and we take the things and we travel by car along the cost of Brail to see the bealtifull things.
When we got there my father didn't remember to get the money to pay the hotel and we sleeped at the car...In the morning my father take the money at the bank and finely we find another hotel to stay.
We see many diferents things the culter,the turistic points like beaches and Pelourinho wich have a strong relation with the past off this place.
In the last day we do the boat tour...The omly thing was the camera had broken but this travel was unforgettable :D.
Hi Ricardo!!
ResponderExcluirAs I said in class the other day travel is the verb, whereas the noun is trip. So a more suitable title for your story would be: The Trip
The rest of the corrections you should do, I'll be list below.
my fathers = my parents
diceded = decided
we take the things = we took our stuff
and we travel = and travelled
Brail = Brazil
the bealtifull things = many beautiful things
to pay the hotel = to pay for the hotel
we sleeped at the car = we slept in the car
In the morning = In the following morning
my father take = ... cashed
finely = finally
we find = we found
see = saw
diferents = different
the culter?? I didn't get this one!
points = attractions
like beaches = like the beaches
wich have a strong relation with = which is strongly related to
In the last day = On the last day
we do the boat tour = we wnet on a boat tour
The omly thing was = There was only one bad thing:
broken = broken.
but this travel was unforgettable = This trip was unforgettable
Best wishes, Janine