terça-feira, 16 de março de 2010

My embaressed trip!

Hi, Janine!
When I was 12 years old, I traveled with my whole class, I went to Hopi Hari, a very famous amusement park in São Paulo, I was having a lot of fun! It was amazing there! But suddenly my friends decided to go on attraction called ''Splash'' I thought it was a nice attraction, and I decided to go too. In line while we waited our turn, we saw a lot of people getting out of attraction completely wet! I was scary, but in that point I couldn't give up going. When our turn finally came we went on the boat and started sailing in the water, suddenly a lot of water fell on us, it was very scary and fun at the same time! In the end, I liked the experience, but the worse part had not arrived yet. When we got out the attraction I was completely weeeeeet! Oh my god, my shirt was transparent! It was a very embaressed situation! :/ But fortunataly I had another shirt with me and I went to the bathroom and changed =) In the end of the day everything was fine, and I had a lot of fun! =)

Taynná.

Um comentário:

  1. Very nice story, Taynná!! It was definitely an embarrassing situation!
    There are some small problems to be check, but you did very fine!
    whole class, I went to Hopi Hari = ... to Hopi Hari
    São Paulo, = São Paulo.
    to go on attraction = ... an attraction
    ''Splash'' = ''Splash''.
    In line = In the line,
    waited our turn = waited for our turn
    I was scary = I was scared
    in that point = at that point
    we got out the attraction = we got out of...
    a very embaressed situation = ... embarrassing situation
    fortunataly = fortunately
    and changed = changed it.

    Best wishes, Janine

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